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Eye of The Tiger

Silent stalker,
Muscles coiled,
Ready to spring,
Teeth bared.

He sits on his haunches,
Contemplating his Prey,
Lazily, he flicks his tail,
Knowing he can take down a gazelle with ease.

Crouched,
Ready to spring,
Muscles ready at an instant to explode,
To burst forth in a blur of energy,
To kill.

It's the Eye of the Tiger.

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  • I felt great intensity in your poem. Refreshing and interesting write. Good job and thank you for your entery!

  • VERY GOOD i like it keep up the great writes

  • Wonderfully penned write here; I love the imagery brought forth
    best of luck to you