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My frozen heart

My heart is like many
frozen peaks of a
vast mountain range.

It knows no love except
the love which you feed
it.

I have turned my
heart to ice before
it once again gets
hurt the way is

always seems to be
hurt. No more shall
I love with my whole

being. I once again
turn to ice, that
which was once so soft.

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  • the imagery that you've created with your words is just incredible, and along with that imagery you've captured the emotions also. Incredible job with this prompt.

    good luck
    kat

  • Emotional

    A lot of emotion is put into this. It is truly written from a hurting heart. You got me misty eyed.

    "No more shall I love with my whole being" Holding back on love makes you miss so much. You need to take chances.
    Good luck in the contest.