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Good Book

This looks a good book
I this looks a great book
Yup, its a bloody good book
I,I,I.

The cover looks super
Your right the cover looks...
bloody super, no, no, no
I think the covers fine.

Fine you say, fine
I'll give you fine,
It's a bloomin good book
It's what you say?

Look its a bloody good
book a bloody good book
I say I read the book,
Oh you read the book

and, and when you read
the book what did you
think, well I've read the book
but not all the book.

You read the book you say
you read the bloody book
yes I read the book and,
and if you just let me

finish, I read the book and
I read you read the book
Yes I am reading the book
which has a good cover, yes

And, the book was the,
criky don't tell me in
the book had some
funny pictures right.

No, no it's a bloody good book
I chose the book cause of the
pretty colour, I read the book
cause it looked bloody good.

I, I that it does it looks a bloody
good book, a good book indeed
so I read the back of the book
and read the little bit on the flap.

I thought what a bloody good book
and it has, so far its been a bloody
good read, so there its a good
don't tell the wife though.

The wife he says, the wife I the
wife, you tell your bloody missus
everything, well if its such a
good book why shouldn't I.

Look, guy's forget I ever told
you bout the book, I mean
It's just a bloody book. I a
bloody book, oh a bloody book. 

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Comments

  • Mhm. Nice shiny silver!

  • Funny how the cover can cause such wonder when the true story lies within. A very thought provoking write you have created and I read it as more of an internal struggle.
    In God's Love
    Three Doves

  • ea silver member
    May 18
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    haha, aye, aye, sir - tis clever and a hoot! The three voices make for a riotous read.