I wanna make you cry
I wanna watch you die inside
I wanna watch you sob in the corner of your room
I wanna make you feel so blue
I want you to look into my eyes
And never forget
I want you to watch me walk away
I want you to feel regret
You are so self-masochistic
I'm so angry and sadistic
It'll work out perfectly
I'll help you hurt yourself
I want you to look into my eyes
And never forget
I want you to watch me walk away
I want you to feel regret
I wanna help you hurt more
I wanna make you into a little whore
This'll work out perfectly
I'll take your self respect
I wanna make you cry
Author notes
I was reading an old poem i wrote for a beautiful girl, it went something like this... If you slice your wrists i'll just wipe away the blood... I rewrote it and this is what came out, i think it is a hell of alot better
No questions, just tell me your full leangth, uncensored opinion.
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Abe I liked your old poem better. This sad little girl misses the Abe that used to be. But I know you're not going to change for anything.
You're the only reason I keep this account. I would have deleted it long ago, if it weren't for your poetry.
this poem makes me want to cry. -
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well, im happy im the only reason you still write too hear. skepticle of that statement, but it means alot to hear you say that.
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You shouldn't be skeptical, I mean every word
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ok im sorry this is gonna sound really mean but how is this christian inspirational? this sounds more vindictive in times than caring....which i guess can be the christian way but you write of taking someones self respect away. how is that loving
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oh, hahah i tagged it with ironic catagories, all opposites of what it is. except for the shockvalue tag, that one was intentional. none of those tagse, except for shockvalue, describe this poem
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ok i like it ... alot
great job!!!
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Dude. I fucking love it,
My favorite lines were:
You are so self-masochistic
I'm so angry and sadistic
It'll work out perfectly
I'll help you hurt yourself
Dude, no doubt.
Amzing.
We should collaborate a poem together.
Ha.
Keep it up bro.
PCe.
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