how am i?
how am i feeling today?
like i want to cry
all my emotions away
let my feelings bleed
from this here poem
pour out in the end
middle and proem
cry tears of joy; no
cry tears of pain
let the tears flow
like drops of acid rain
why do i cry?
for that i'm unsure
my past has left a scar
which i can not cure
maybe it's the attempted rape
or the beatings from my dad
maybe it's the self-inflicted wounds
that leave me feeling sad
possibly the nightmares
such foul daily dreams
when i cry in my sleep
and wake up with a scream
my entire life
i've taken the fall
but yet i still managed
and lived through it all
some don't know what it's like
to everyday feel this way
to have the happiness sucked out of you
every single day
every-time i sleep
i relive these moments
but that's my life
can't do nothing but own it
What do you think? Got any better title suggestions?
Comments
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the title was perfect for this poem. it fit this poem well and its simple. you shouldn't change it
anyhoo, this is such a painful write. must've hurt so bad to write this, but heyy i'm sure you felt better after just letting it all go right
this is such a heart-breaking piece. sometimes i feel the same way too, but heyy, life moves on, and nothing can really be done about it. just hope for a better tomorrow love ya, take care
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WOW
That is amazing... I feel u, and u know I really can understand where u'r coming from... I love u girl, continue to write.
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