This planet lives
on borrowed time,
perhaps the fault
of avid men;
each day we search
the earth for signs,
when will we scream
that last amen?
our last amen.
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/30/30 by AutumnGypsy.
550 points, ended May 17, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellent
Such a great write with so few words. Best of luck in the contest.
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I give it a platinum.
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I can not believe this hasn't placed! It targets the required topic in poetically exquisite verse. Most absolutely publishable.
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WONDERFUL!!!!
Indeed that day is coming for mankind!
I cannot say just why but I have this feeling that fantastic changes are in the near future for us and this world. 
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This is wonderful, a different take on this prompt completely, how no one saw this idea is beyond me. Very poignant. Best to you in the contest
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Wow, your rhyme and rhythm is superb; good luck!!
Maria
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Ah this has the expertise of rhyme and rhythm, and the thoughts are the prompt C
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