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False Idols (Leave the Perfect Scars)

Bury your honor and this plague with you
i dont care anymore no one will miss you
you've got eyes on the streets!
I've got eyes on the stars
so bury the makeup reveal who you are!

[short instrumental]

so close yet, come so far
(so beautiful!)
no one will miss you
(so just go-)
so just go , you came so far...
this world wont feel the issue
(you lie in beds!)
and now-
(that are laced with coal)
and the tears that come from scars

so test me!, i will not bow! ,no mortal wounds me!
my skin is gold enamored with a trust
(i see your eyes)
in your eyes!
(so beautiful! can my eyes trust what they see!)
my skin is gold enamored
with a fog....

[instrumental]

[beware of false idols
they leave the perfect scars
beware of false idols
they bear the perfect marks
(jet black scars)] {x2}

so close yet, come so far
(so beautiful!)
no one will miss you
(so just go-)
so just go , you came so far...
this world wont feel the issue
(you lie in beds!)
and now-
(that are laced with coal)
and the tears that come from scars

so beautiful...
your eyes lead to the well...
but as some people say...
Its a long road to hell...

beware of the serpent
he tempts you with his snare
so hold on to her scent
and it will lead you there
the fire in your eyes
the bullet in this guise
(beware of the serpent)
and hold onto your breathe...

so close yet, come so far
(so beautiful!)
no one will miss you
(so just go-)
so just go , you came so far...
this world wont feel the issue
(you lie in beds!)
and now-
(that are laced with coal)
and the tears that come from scars

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Comments

  • A nice lyrical write with a flawless meter and a great rhyming scheme. Excellent work. I have the words and the "look" so give me the sound and the "feel" LOL

  • love this one!

    You did a great job on this... do you have a youtube of it?