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You say that life is over,

You say that life is over,
your luck has run out.
Even if you had a whole field of four leaf clover,
your life would still be in a drought.

For this I must say to you dear friend.
This little dry spell in your life is not the end.

We all have your high times and times of sorrow,
But to take your life is like stealing, when you could just borrow.

Trust me dear friend,
there will always be a tomorrow.
Whether filled with happiness or sorrow,
I will fight for you until the bitter end.

So you have made up your mind,
and to all other thoughts you are disinclined.
I guess there is nothing else left to be said,
but that there is pain and sadness ahead.

We all have your high times and times of sorrow,
But to take your life is like stealing, when you could just borrow.

Your life is worth so much more than you know,
the great friendship you bestow.

I will not ask why you want to leave,
just shake my head in disbelieve.
Well all have our hard times of sorrow,
just remember dear friend there is always tomorrow.













 

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  • Great Little Write

    It has lilt, meaning and insight. It would make great song lyrics. Howard

    • thank you poet.... Im working on putting a tune to this song.. its just taking a wile.. because i find the topic depressing...

  • This was just beautiful. YOu did a wonderful job with this prompt, it's so gentle and yet very inspiring. I loved every word. Good luck in the contest, this is an amazing piece.
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • Tqop
    May 18

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    Very Inspiring:

    That's so beautiful! I love how you reached out to this person telling them there's more to life, although you didn't ask why they were considering to end their life; you told them there's always tomorrow, which is very comforting. Great job. Thanks for entering, and thanks for sharing your inspiring thoughts to us.

    Love,
    Evemauy


  • GothicFyre
    May 17
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    Wow ... I loved this. good luck in the contest, it deserves to do well.

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