My whole life I've been
Beaten and abused
Lied to and used
Kick and bruised
Hurt and broken
By words unspoken
Yet left out in the open
I've been left out
Forgotten and numbed
To pain I've succumbed
All of this has summed
Up to almost nothing except
Hatred and fear
A happy austere
I just need you near
And it all goes away
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ahhh beautiful. so deep. i love it.
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Thanks so much
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This poem rocks, it's really surprising at the end. I love the space before the last line too. But I would add punctuation to make it flow to that conclusion more smoothly.
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Thanks for the recommendation, I wrote it in a rush without much thought to it.
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Well it's really good
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Aww thanks so much!!
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