He wants to sleep
but he wont.
Obviously
drunken stoned...
He wants to create
but he's so alone
He's begun to fade
toward the unknown...
Simply the sound of her sweet voice
could have saved his sinking soul
but now he's drowned
in the misery of missing her
waiting to be found
in this deep hole.
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this is so sad... like it is pulling me in the abyss, but all i want to do is pull him out of it. in other words, i can feel this...
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Breathtaking. Absolutely stunning job. Great captivating first line, really jolted me and pulled my intrigue deeper.
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This makes me feel so sad. You have really captured and expressed the emotions well and I know people really go through things like this..
Really awesome.
♥
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I love it
Its a great poem -
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thankso much
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