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The Ocean Shore

The glittering water
The roar of the shore
Colours of the ocean
And so much more

The glamorous ripple
The salt water air
The sandy beach
The orange everywhere

Waves lap the shore
The grey sparkling rocks
The shoals swimming
The birds chirping

And most of all
The pearl necklace!

They remind me
Of the ocean shore
And that reminds me
Of you once more


Author notes

Word list

Shore

Glamorous

Salt water

colours

Ocean

Beach

Orange

Roar

Waves

I hope you like it

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  • aww this is wonderful (hehe)
    your list is so sweet
    and i love your poem
    i also absolutely love the ocean
    brilliant imagery
    very good write

    thanks for entering in my contest
    and good luck