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She Asked For It

She titillated and teased,
Her skirt so low,
Her gaze so deep,
She laughed and giggled,

And I had to have her,
I took her in my car,
My shitty little car,
And she laughed at my witty little jokes,

She smoothed her skirt and I tried to sneak,
Oh just one measly peek,
That's when she caught me,
And her brow furrowed,

That look of anger,
Hatred,
I was a walking disease to her,
I slapped her hard,

No one would ever know,
We're out in the middle of nowhere,
No proof,
I will win in the end,

Another slap and rip of clothing,
Stripped of dignity and I laughed,
Stripped of clothing and I laughed,
Oh this bitch asked for it.

Author notes

This was fucking hard to write. I can imagine this going through a disgusting rapist's mind. I felt sick just writing it.

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Comments

  • ssssssssss
    July 16
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    u animal how could u do that?!!!


    • Michael555
      July 22
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      LOL! That wasn't real. Just imaging what goes through the mind of a rapist.


  • Kia-Ruko
    June 10

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    I actually liked it a lot, but I'm just weird that way so yeah... Very nice, my favorite part was in the beginning when you were judging her appearance. I liked it alot, write another!!!

  • it was difficult for me to write ine as well, to go back and remember everything the taste the smells how helpless i was and then to wonder what he was thinking...it is hella hard to write. i personally though found it releaving in the end, it was almost like ending a terrible book.... i apprieate you entering this, did this really hapoen?
    thanx for sharing this with me