The woman came from a man's rib.
Not from his feet to be stepped on.
Not from his head to be surperior,
But from the side to be equal.
Under the arm to be protected.
And next to the heart to loved.
Author notes
I just love this quote. 
A contest entry
- PREWRITE!!!!! by darkscorpia.
640 points, ended May 19, 131 entries
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*stands there silent, not sure what to say*.....
Wow Love thats beautiful.....that is exactly how i view you....its perfect....as are you! i love you molli! *kisses you deeply*
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Spelling, Grammar & Organisation: 13/15
Written Expression: 19/20
Poetic Devices: 9/10
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I love this quote. Do you mind if i post it on my profile?
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I don't mind at all. Be my guest.
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awww ^____^
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