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Why Now

Whats done is done
With a final tear
Falling into place
As the end comes near

Alone and dieing...
What I used to love, now i fear
Blood driping to the floor
As the pain starts to sear

I start to thing WHY NOW
As i sit on my bed
Looking down
Seeing my wrists driping red

I used to...
But i dont want to die
I love this life now
Its to hard to say goodbye

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  • XxAlone4evermorexX
    November 21
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    oops i forgot i commented on this a while back..lol

    but my verdict is still the same :


  • XxAlone4evermorexX
    November 21
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    love it. your very talented

  • Maybe I should slit my wrists in front of you and ask if you hate me now, of course I'd probably just see you laugh at me and shout...

  • love it

    u like life
    but life sucks

    • i dont like life
      but i realized i do have one person to live for now
      but other than that life is my enemy

  • speechless

    love the emotion in this...love it!

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