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Godless But Divine

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 I-

As I woke in darkness laid

The blush of my flesh almost fade
pain was harsh which made me cry

I knew that soon I have to die
in a cave so dim and totally cold

A bottle of wine I reached to hold

my throat was dry I started to drink
first felt like drinking heavy ink
The taste of wine was rusty salt
a bottle titled blood single malt

I like the taste so I drank some more

Suddenly I felt better with nothing to sore 

 II-

On a pillow of dreams my life I wrote

Cursed the demons for the hell they brought

Then wondered if really god exist

Or it’s only a notion lost in mist

Satan, Satan who plays us well

In his playground that he calls hell

I wonder also if God has a game

Other than sustaining us with pain

 III-

War and dust and creepy days

Putting us all in a maze

Where we rote and live the lie

When everything will fade and die 

 IV-

 Darkness I live through you with grin

Yet enjoying each and every sin

Like the effect of my vine

Am truly Godless But Divine…

 

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  • ennovy silver member
    June 7

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    BRAVO!

    I strongly feel we are all in your shoes too. Life has away of making us reap, bad & good. This poem you wrote; both touches happiness & sadness...reaches in wrapping around the spiritual believe of what is divine!....well written in dark emotions......an excellent explaination of your name Godless But Divine........I enjoyed this read...Novy

  • I really like this and the fact that it rhymes too. I like part II the best. great job!!

  • Beautiful. I love the art too. Whats the title of it ?


  • rollingzen
    May 20
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    well done


  • liltulip gold member
    May 20

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    brilliant

    showing pain in a different light, with a wonderful write, and a pleasure to read...thank You for sharing with us!

  • the picture is for Marquis De Sade...

  • liveddog gold member
    May 17

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    Hi G.b.d.,
    This is another great piece of writing. You describe so brillantly the questioning journey of everyone attempting to find meaning in life or more baldly in existence. Anyone who has raised the existential questions will truly connect with this poem.
    I am still fascinated with how one can be godless but divine at the same time? You will notice that I have not capitalised the words 'godless' and 'divine' in my question, and that is because those words are reduntant for me in my life. I gather, however, that they still hold great importance to you because you do capitalise them? It also intrigues and impresses me that a young man of 26 addresses these important issues!!
    By the way G.b.d. the picture is super - is it inspired by Dante's 'Inferno'?
    I wish great things for you,
    Liveddog.


  • Terry-too silver member
    May 17
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    I diud not click on this poem and haveno time for it now. Sorry.


  • coversheet
    May 17

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    Kinda grim. But overall, makes you really think.
    It's good.

    Although I don't think "sustancing" in line 37 is a word.

  • a good poem penned - ah the dance of god and the devil and how it spills into us at times, good imagery, twisitng in and out of a haze of sorrow fuelled by wine and madness.

  • thank you a lot...I miss yo too glad to hear from you...

  • YOU wrote a very smooth write here,
    my treasured friend, I cant pin point what i like best, because as a whole it is Godless But so freaking Divine! Bravo , i do miss your writes and i am glad your back,

    blessings

    Rend

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