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Used

I feel so alone and used,
Like the items I stand beside.
So overwhelmed and ugly,
So beaten and hurt.

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ANGST/PAIN YARDSALE

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  • Mistress Masquerade
    August 20

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    Very deep emotions are here. They're dark and pained. Beautifully short. This is all you need to really express this feeling. Great job.

  • broken-tears
    July 2
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    Deep

    Yhoo have done soo much in such little wordz liked it alot


  • RavenTheWhite
    May 20

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    i sense the misery of being left alone on the table and not one person would buy the "beaten" object. well done!

    the fellow poet the