he lied, he said he would always be there and always love her. so why did u lie?
she now lies in bed, tears in her eyes, ipod on high, blocking out the world. she cuts her wrists but don't worry, she says they're just little reminders of how much you broke her heart. she always gets lied to and hurt, but why did you have to be one of the people to hurt and lie to her? do you have any idea how she feels?
well if you want to know how she feels, cut your wrists, jump in a lake and drown yourself, and stab yourself in the heart.
that is how i feel, but the only thing is, if you tried it you would be dead, but i am still alive and living with the pain of all of it. so if you were to do that consider yourself lucky for you wouldn't have to suffer like i have to.
i use to think there was such a thing as a "happy ending" but there isn't your born, have kids, and die. so the so called "happy ending" is dying?
yes, the happy ending IS dying for you cannot feel pain nor cause it when you are dead. therefore i guess dying is the best thing that will happen to you in your life time.
if everyone must die, then why can't i die, with all my pain and agony i have already been through? haven't i been through enough?
the girl holds up the knife to her chest once more for one last cut, one last try at death, and with that cut she falls to the floor.
all i see is a daze of white and HIS face looking at me, i try to wipe away the picture for he shall not be the last one i see. but i realize he's standing over me.... and wait... is he... CRYING? he whispers "i love you" i whisper back "go jump off a bridge" he looks at me with worried eyes and sighs "i didn't lie to you, i didn't mean to cause you pain, i shouldn't have and i'm sorry but i do love you!" i look back at him speechless and then he leans down and kisses my forehead and rubs my head he whispers "good-bye i love you" i daze out before anything else happens...
Author notes
the "girl" in the beginning i'm talking about me, the whole poem is based on me... i truly feel this way....
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you know what.. whoever this 'guy' is that lied to you... he can go f*** his self!!!!
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lolz!!!
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well its true!!
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lmao! ur sooo nice!
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yes, yes i am.
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lol at least ur honest
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I love telling the truth. <3
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lol yea i bet
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i see where your coming from and i dont think you shuld kill ur self but if cutting and writing helps i say go for it as long as u can control it and its an awsome poem
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thx
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ur welcome ijust wish i could write as well
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I reallly like it i almost cried. And as far as baseing it on u plz dont kill urself. I too know what it feels like to wanna die. But i dont go too far(cutting is enough).
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aww... its really good..kinda sad.. but a good poem
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yeah well i write kinda sad things cause i'm depressing so yea....
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Powerful,sad piece.I know how it feels like you want to die and cut yourself.I'd say he's not worthy,he doesn't deserve you,but I already know that you can't command your heart and feelings.I like "happy endings" as used in here.Keep writing!!! Cause it's the only savior from life's cruelties.
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Really good.
I really felt the emotions.
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So sad and touching here, it relates so much, I hope you're feeling okay there...
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Wow...very powerful
Your words in this are so real...I really liked reading this!
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