not a boyfriend
but hell
at least he likes me
and I as well
his cute grin
and raven-dark hair
he has me hooked
I always stare
talking is easier
I just rambled on
but he listens
this I know
I want his hand
intertwined with mine
to feel his warmth
but it takes time
so he's not my boyfriend
but he's really close
we adore each other
and that's all I need, if not most
Author notes
this was the first time I used a cuss word interesting
hmm i just realized all the poems about him have a want to hold his hand in them
I plan to revise, what do you think?
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hmmm I like this.. good write.. very teen naive love thing... Sure other girls have been here. The facade of love.. You know.. mabey if I had the right hair color.. or mabey her personality, or mabey everytime I laughed if I didn't have that akward snort at the end.. mabey then he would notice me.. I think the past is/can be a guide to help with the future.. ah oh well.. wonderfully penned my net buddy..
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you did hold his hand
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