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weakened by the
waves of adore, I
am but a lonely
traveler that drifted
into the harbor of
your arms.

crown and anchor
me until those winds
find my tattered sails
and breath life to
this lost heart again.


© Sweeney

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  • tara wilson gold member
    July 11

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    this is so absolutely beautiful and such a poem it is with your signature mood and unique voice. i love it. i've missed reading you!


  • Nangaleema
    May 29

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    somewhere there is a lucky girl who has no lack of breath stopping words of love. from what i have seen of your work - i think you must be the ultimate woo'er.
    this is another lovely piece.


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 16

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    no better harbour than open arms, no better anchor than love... beautifully soft ... a sigh poem. i understand this one so very well.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Manicmuze
    May 16

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    Very tender, comforting ... "into the harbor of your arms"...is beautiful

    nicely done, as always
    ~ w


  • Night Hope gold member
    May 16
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    A soft & tender penning, Scribe.



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