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First Kiss

I am breathless as the time approaches
You gentley hold me and whisper
I love you
Then your hand moves to my face
You tilt it up towards you
Then he leans in a kisses you
You tremble your heart races
Time stops in its place but only for a moment
Your heart says more
Whlie your lungs yell for air
You become drunk on is love
Then he pulls away
Only to look into my eyes
A tear breaks over my cheek
My first kiss and I tremble
I Whisper more please

I am breathless

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  • Knight70 silver member
    July 8
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    This is beautiful, Simona Marie.



    All my love,
    Your husband, Don


  • Borntowriteforever
    May 25
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    wonderful job on capturing the first experience of a kiss. it was lovely


  • Denerica
    May 16
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    Nice captured first time experiences. Beautiful. Blessings.


    • spanishrose
      May 16
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      Thank you

      Thank you for you nice comment. I was hoping I could get the feeling down right. I know every ones expierence is different. I am glad you liked it.