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traffic jam (haiku)

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traffic jam
behind an oil tanker
running on empty



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  • zt
    May 26

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    ~smile~ Not a good place to be. The only place that's worse is being in the middle of nowhere when the fuel light comes on and you know the last station is 15 miles behind you but it's 30 miles to the next one. Go on or go back? Hmmm...