a love this strong could never be wrong
a tear falls from cheek to creek
time to fly no wish to die
friends are few not easily found
a love surrounds and i bask in its warmth
slowly the rain comes and softly it falls
nowhere to go nowhere to run
a face of smoke and love of life
love that's true is hard to find
a love like you can only be true
let me trust you as no other
let me love you and only you
a love this strong could never be wrong
a tear falls from cheek to creek
time to fly no wish to die
friends are few not easily found
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Your right, I do relate to this one. Its very touching.
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Easily one of my favorite things you have written. Fills the mind with thoughts and dreams. Your Pet.
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Wow, I love how you started and ended with the same lines...wonderful!
This powerful in emotion. Love is a hard topic to write about but you make it look so easy. This is truely a touching piece. Whoever it is about should feel quite special. I blushed while reading it.
well done,
-Dusty-
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