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charlie's conversations: a strange night with that girl from uptown

you said my voice was the melody that kept the night from going completely quiet, my kiss lit up the sky.

no. i strung some words together until they spelled out lets fuck.

you never wrote me poetry, did you.

i can if youll get my dick up again. thats where all the words come from.

tell me what i really sound like, charlie.

your voice stings like cheap vodka. your legs remind me theres a god.


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  • darker than black
    November 10
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  • jantastic gold member
    October 29
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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    September 29

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    THIS IS JUST RAW GUT EXCELLENCE I LOVE IT IN ITS BRUTALITY
    NICELY PENNED YOU ROCK
    T


  • PorcelainHope
    September 28

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    Oh man, this is just raw honesty,, and brilliant.
    Definitely a voice I never heard before.

    You blew me away with this one, seriously.
    Bookmarked.


  • sinfull
    September 7
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    Brutal

    This is the aragance that people come back for. No filters. No warning labels. no polite or reticent just WHAM.. I like it


  • flight
    August 21
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    nasty and fucking honest. your writes are addictive.
    peace to all ~flight


  • Allyce May gold member
    August 4

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    Jeeeeezeuz. Every line I read I thought: fu*k, that's some good shiz right there.

    "no. i strung some words together until they spelled out lets fuck."

    Le sigh. I'm always asking for honesty in life, and despite the harshness of it, it's always good to get it. I appreciated the raw, honest quality of this piece immensely.

    This is so fantastic

  • patron saint
    May 19

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    Matt, I fucking love you. Seriously, you are brilliant. How about you publish more of your work? I'm adding this to my favorites.

    J


  • autarky
    May 18
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    ahhh charlie's chats are back. i missed them.


  • notorious gold member
    May 18

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    "you never wrote me poetry, did you?"
    I think that question mark should be a period...like it'd be spoken in a flat voice, not in a questioning way.

    "thats where all the words come from."
    Loooooooove that. It's bloody stinging, like threst of it.

    Your last 2 line are endlessly good.

    ;
    Jessica.


    • vaguelyfamiliar
      September 17

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      I ditto that period business, grammar be damned.

      hah And I've been fucked by boys like this. And I've fucked boys and basically told them this.

      Brilliant. Seriously. wham.


  • Emmyb gold member
    May 16

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    hahaha. this is great. the first line wasnt overly captivating for me but the rest of it made up for it. I think prophet will like this a lot. all the best. Emmy


  • brandy.
    May 16
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    raw.


  • BlancetNoir gold member
    May 16

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    thats where all the words come from...
    I loved this line in particular but the whole thing is so authentic and marvelously funny. excellent, I love this.


  • e s h a.
    May 16
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    dicks!


  • sharptooth
    May 15

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    'your voice stings like cheap vodka'
    awesome use of the word "stings"...cheap vodka definitely doesn't go down smooth.

    here's three yellow things, with hands sort of doing the YMC for you:

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