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There You Go

There      you go again,
              talking about the past,
              as if the pain in my eyes isnt enough for you.

You        dig the knife farther into my heart,
              and push me away from everyone and everything
              you know wich button to push to make me withdraw,
              from even myself.

Go          around in a violent dance,
              spinning round and round,
              day after day.
              The colors, they wont stop for anyone,
              not even for you.

Again      I pull away,
              rushing for an escape.
              one day I just happen to find it,
              and i take my chance and run,
              run with the wind blowing against my face,
              blowing my past away.
       
              I leave you behind and move on,
              to live my life.
             
             
             
             
                 

Author notes

Sorry I know it isnt the greatest poem ever, but it's what came to my mind.

Dancing.In.The.Rain

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  • attack110
    July 24
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    i know how you feel, escaping bad situations, can be very healthy. I hope it works out for you.

  • Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie