The radio played your song
I listened silently in hope
I think you might be wrong
now I'm left trying to cope
You say that you don't know
how I feel or if I even do
each day I try more to show
these things and more to you
I wear my heart on my sleeve
my emotions are there as well
my life is over if you leave
I'll spend it all in hell
Better you take my hand
walk together threw life
I'll adorn yours with a band
I want you for my wife
Life is hard and so is my work
I do it all as best I can
sometimes I may be a jerk
your still what makes me a man
Now hear my song I play
exposing everything I feel
if it is as right as the day
lets take this, make it real
If You know me
as I know you
make me happy
please say " I DO"
Author notes
Your song : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wnG6i7DWV7M
My song answer : <www.youtube.com/watch?v=z26atUKQWsA
sometimes men can be jerks - feel what we do but fear showing it
sometimes we do need the push - a cold splash of water in the face
Picture from Deviant Art
Name of Picture - The name of the rose by parliament street
A contest entry
- Guys Only.. and only 8 at that by Riftkin.
700 points, ended May 16, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~Song Prompt~ by peaceimout.
550 points, ended May 30, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent
Such a terrific write for the prompt. You captured it so well. Congratulations on the silver.
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I love the response you have sent out. For that song, speaks from the heart just like your poem does. It was a pleasure to read this.
Wishing you the best in my contest.
Riftkin
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