Forcing one onto the upright table...
The blood and filth upon this wooden plank...
Tells of a terror filled tale...
Drive metal hooks into the sides of your eye sockets...
Below you are the basins to catch your bleeding...
Out of your body, blood will rocket...
Your slaughterer, rusty nails in his face are embed...
With wraps of bleeding barbed wire tightly wrapped around his head...
After your demise, he shall be well fed...
Turn the crank slowly, hooks begin pulling...
Through out this chamber, your screams echoing...
Blood from your eyes is billowing...
Skull cracks and splits...
Skin tears and rips...
Blood glop's and drips...
Corroded blade cuts off a piece...
Jagged, misshaped teeth enjoy this feast...
Cut away, and snack on the freshly deceased...
Your were a plaything...
For this creature of blood and cannibalism...
This torture chamber dweller...
The Disemboweler.
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Ahhh A delicous feast to start my day. If you write a movie script you have got to get me in for the premier screening as it is sure to be one to remember. This poem works for me from start to finish through flow and rhyme. Excellent little story in prose.
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Ohhh yeah!!!! This reminds me of my pieces about different torture devices. Let's just say, I have had many used on many occasions.
I loved this piece. My fav device is the pear!!!
Hugs and bites, vampi
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Catchy title! I have noticed that I have started to brace myself before clicking on your writes because I know that whatever I read it's going to freak me out hahaha
You really do write dark very well and have a knack for making your reader feel as though they are right there in the poem! I always leave your page feeling as though I have been sprayed with blood 
hahaha. Gore at it's best! Well done yet again 
Oh! My favorite lines were "Skull cracks and splits... Skin tears and rips... Blood glop's and drips..." blehhh great stuff lol
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Skull cracks and splits...
Skin tears and rips...
Blood glop's and drips...
You really are a master at your writing. This is amazing, it makes me wonder if you shouldn't write stories as well.
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In the depths of hell
the poets swell,
the air as black as ink.
This is sick and so are you, but
at least ya made me think!
Awesome writing John!
Are you any relation to Stephen King?
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D.A.M.N. ...
That was just sick. I actually cringed. I LOVE it. Amazing. Shivering, rippling goose flesh twisted in terror and drown in bloody screams as they are ripped apart, bones picked clean...
Something I definitely enjoyed. Well done.
~Sera
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wow this poem is so well written its almost to scary, VERY awesome, goo luck in the comp
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Dark and full of imagery that can make the skin crawl. Nicely done on the dark path to torture.. Best of luck in the contest.
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Dude that was the most amazing horror poem I have read yet. I loved it. The nasty visuals, the detailed discription... It was great.
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Yikes! This hurts to just read!
Love,
Amera♥
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you are very talented.
"Your slaughterer, rusty nails in his face are embed...
With wraps of bleeding barbed wire tightly wrapped around his head...
After your demise, he shall be well fed...
Turn the crank slowly, hooks begin pulling...
Through out this chamber, your screams echoing...
Blood from your eyes is billowing...
Skull cracks and splits...
Skin tears and rips...
Blood glop's and drips..."
where have you been hiding? -T
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I'd like to see this on film!! So, I can scare myself to death.
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Wonderful
very descriptive and dark piece. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.
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This torture chamber dweller...
there is so many scary stories out
and this is one.. of the things people do
to hurt others.. you penned a scary here
Hugs Angel♥
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This reminds me of another with a similar style..can't place it right now but it will come to me I am sure.Darkness rules here
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Yeay....
Ahh...I'm sooo glad to read this, sick..sick..sick.
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Yuk yuk yuk
Eww man thats sick but another awesome write! X x keep it up
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"cut away, and snack on the freshly deceased" incredible line... only becuase of a recent experience... lol don't want to bring it up... but what makes this even creepier is the fact that it exists... tales based on turth are always so much more gruesome... once again horribly magnificent... if you ever make it big I will be one of your most avid fans!!!
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*shudders*
I am just a bit squeamish, so it was a little creepy for me. but good lord, the imagery. so vivid and I have to say I didn't mind the rhyme in the least.
kinda makes me realize, I should never get on people's bad sides. ya never know what they might be hiding in their basements.... -
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i thank you very much for your comment.
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