You used to be my slick chick,
My grampa told me.
You used to smile at strangers
To brighten up their day.
You used to laugh at nothing,
When you were bored.
That sparkles gone
Out from your eyes.
Baby, you've changed,
Maybe I've changed.
I'm not your slick chick no more,
I ain't your little girl.
I don't stare at the sky and wonder,
What if I could fly?
I don't tie ribbons in my hair,
And I don't talk to my cuddly bear.
Cause maybe, I've changed.
I've been through so much
In my life.
I've seen things,
People only imagine to be true.
All the things I've been through,
Have made me mature,
A lot more than I should have.
But, I don't want to be mature any more,
I don't want to face the future.
I wanna chase rainbows,
And roll around in leaves.
I wanna tie ribbons in my hair,
And talk to my cuddly bear.
Bianca Melody.
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel Baby by KelsBabez.
700 points, ended June 10, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I feel like this someday. Hopeless. Wasted. Worthless, a failure. x
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This was cute and very touch
it had a nice flow
and in some places seemed lost
good luck -
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Mark -
Welcome to AllPoetry!
This was a beautiful poem and I can really relate
You may want to reconsider the background - it makes the text hard to read
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