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Open the Door

I'm always watching the door,

waiting.

For any reasoning..

for any answer.


I don't know who

I'm looking for,

I'm not sure what

I expect to find.

But I still stare,

just wishing.


I'm often asked who

I'm searching for,

but I have no answer.


All I know is

I can't not watch,

I can't miss you.


I'm not sure who you are..

maybe I'll know one day.

Maybe my answers will

come with your presence.

What do you think?

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  • XxLovexXStoryxX
    May 16
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    Very Deep and Beautiful.
    You Have Such Amazing Talent =)