Apathetic asperations
fade into mistaken dreams
decaying all my soul with you
i follow you blindly
follow you without a thought
thinking its love
when its really lust
vengeance in my eyes
growing pain
growing rage and sacrifice
letting it all go and letting the lion sleep once again...
something a bit more depressing for once
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omg big words in teh beginning lol o.o oh wow thas darkish like i dont know its good and things o,o the lion thing threw me off kinda till i re read the whole thing its good i like it
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WOW
I know the feeling
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it sounds like something edward would have written...
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Dreamy real dreamy! Great write, my fav. Part:"growing rage and sacrifice
letting it all go and letting the lion sleep once again.." I loved how the animal seems all omega atleast to me, plus the fact that burst of passion are so strong quick and fierce with loins buuuut if you know they don't last very long in the endurance, only lions wake to do the same thing again and again in short naps as well,(from what I've seen), I could be wrong, buuuut, its a well fitting ending anyway! Great write! -
wow, an amazing piece and i really loved the line
letting it all go and letting the lion sleep once again...
It really captured me and i thought it was a great ending to the poem, really well written
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