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New Beginnings

Instantly we connected
And now my heart won't stop pounding.
You're all I could ever ask for
And so much more.
There's so much I want to say
But I can't say it quick enough.
You are stealing my heart
And I'm tempted to just give you the key.

Author notes

This is for my wonderful girlfriend, Torri ;"T"

I know this is brief, but I am overwhelmed... :)

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • A Lonely Soul
    May 15

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    It's beautiful baby, and I'd be honored to hold it. I'd keep it close to my heart, where you shall always be. I give my heart to you, and I don't doubt it for one second that this isn't meant to be.
    I love you Christie
    ~~Torri~~