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I shot John Lennon (finished)

I shot Lennon
I shot him dead
I shot Lennon
Right through the head

Hey Jude
Fuck Jude
Hey Jude
Fuck you

I shot Lennon
I shot him dead
I shot Lennon
Right through the head

I killed John Lennon
On his yellow submarine
I shot John Lennon
I watched him scream

I shot Lennon
And now he's dead
I watched him fall
In a pool of red

Read Catcher in the Rye
As I watched him die
I killed John Lennon
And I did it grinnin'

I shot Lennon...
And I'll do it again!
And again!
And again!

Author notes

I think I may be going through another shockvalue period in my writting. I hope you either enjoyed this and had a good laugh, or were shocked and offended.
By the way, im not homocidal or nothing, I just thought of this at a time i was angry with life.

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Comments


  • Samantha Marie
    May 15

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    Well now I enjoy this, it's less repetitive than the first one, and very unqiue and creative

    Great job


  • Magik Milk Glass
    May 15

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    I love this and then again not so much but good poem in general sounds like something I would write And it gave me a good laugh i like that


  • deercatcher
    May 15

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    This is the down side of the right of free speech. It leaves me with a similar feeling as when I see the metallic representation of bulls balls hanging off the trailer hitch of a big 4 wheel drive pick up truck, and I am relieved I don't have any small children to do some explaining to. One little taught fact in the basic skills of socialization is that with right comes responsibility. Perhaps you haven't lived long enough to realize some things are best left unsaid.