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there is, at this moment
a throbbing in my chest
spreading through my body like a slow flame
a link has been forged between he and i
bonds of primal affection
handed down since dawn of man
a meeting of the minds, a spiritual kiss
souls twine in sensuous embrace
pull close anonymity
as we meet under midnight sky
passion meets passion under sparkling stars

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  • sinfull
    September 23

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    Indeed...You write with the pen of a woman who knows the mental is far more sensous than the physical. Very strong presentation and a lovely message. good job!...

  • Kataleena
    September 23
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    This is really beautiful. Sweet and sensual at the same time. Your talent is far beyond your years.


  • Ravynna
    May 20
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    well, i was kind of inspired by c.s.t. *nudge nudge, wink wink* and yes, it is.

  • grrrrrr...

    why are all of your poems sooo good? this is the love poem for english, right?

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