there is, at this moment
a throbbing in my chest
spreading through my body like a slow flame
a link has been forged between he and i
bonds of primal affection
handed down since dawn of man
a meeting of the minds, a spiritual kiss
souls twine in sensuous embrace
pull close anonymity
as we meet under midnight sky
passion meets passion under sparkling stars
What did you think
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Indeed...You write with the pen of a woman who knows the mental is far more sensous than the physical. Very strong presentation and a lovely message. good job!...


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thanks!
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This is really beautiful. Sweet and sensual at the same time. Your talent is far beyond your years.


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well, i was kind of inspired by c.s.t. *nudge nudge, wink wink* and yes, it is.
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c.s.t?? and yes i know who that is.. i thought it was b.f tho.....
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grrrrrr...
why are all of your poems sooo good? this is the love poem for english, right?

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