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Wrong

I'm pulling away
But he just doesn't get it
Touching my hand
He's just so pathetic

I'm telling him no
But he keeps hearing yes
Saying he loves me
He's just so dense

Backing away
But he keep coming closer
Begging to hold me
He's just so pathetic


He's so very sweet
But he doesn't comprehend
He's really not my type
He's just so dense


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NOT I repeart NOT done yet. I'm still in school and will work on it when I get home.

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