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Devour It All

Leaks from tyranny
pulses her insanity
cuts into deranged times
rains acid and burns your eyes

Seeping from empty skies
there is no god if there were you'd die

Sentences like salt on open wounds
ties to evangelist cults out of tune 

...and trusting proofs
...and nuclear open fields
devour it all 

a grave will rise and eat at the throne
a son will rise on his own

they will kill all who follow
drink blood of the father

Leaks from tyranny
exposing every open seem
watch it fall and burn your eyes
watch the dead rise
and eat away land like hungry flies
burning with the idols of mankind

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  • darkyinsoul
    May 23

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    Wow..
    tis excellent
    Leaks from tyranny
    thought pervoking and
    superb write you have penned
    Thanks for the share
    Darky


  • awannabepoet
    May 19

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    Well Well Well, isn't this thing just freakign awesome, dude this is one fantastic piece of poetry hell I could hear it as a song perhaps something the metal gods could belch out at the top of thier screaming lungs.

    I like it, I like it so!