SCREAMING just because it feels like no one is listening,
CRYING because time passes, and it hurts more than anything,
Who were they to blame me for their mistakes.
Make me feel their guilt.
I cried, and I cried through out that lonely night,
When even the sharpest daggers felt soft against this heart of mine.
When the loudest plea was SCREAMING your name,
How helpless had I really become.
A girl with once a life ahead of her,
A dream, a goal, a future.
Now an adult,
confused, lost, silenced.
DESTROYED!!!
SCREAMING FOR MERCY!!!
Not letting her go,
the grip so tight,
it was choking her...
THEY DID THIS TO HER!!!
THEY DIDN'T EVEN FUCKING CARE!!!!!!!
LOST FOREVER...
and nothing left but this slain body
A lost soul forever more...
I SCREAMED!!!...and they never heard..
I CRIED...and they never noticed...
Author notes
A thoughtful piece...I am feelin confused...uncertain... :S
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hey gurl how the hell you been??? this is awsome you still know exactly what to say to get us to understand what you are feeling.
"A girl with once a life ahead of her,
A dream, a goal, a future.
Now an adult,
confused, lost, silenced."
GOD... this is great!!! I loved it so much.


