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Someday I'll Wake (inspired by Howard Moss' "Shorelines")

Someday I’ll wake and hardly think of you.
Someday you won’t be the first thought in my mind.
Some day you’ll be,
A distant memory,
And I won’t think of you all the time.

Someday I’ll wake and no longer miss you.
Someday you won’t have a place in my heart.
You’ll just disappear,
Like you were never here,
And I won’t feel like I’m being ripped apart.

Someday I’ll wake and forget about you.
Someday you’ll be a ghost of my past.
It will be like you’re dead,
You won’t echo in my head.
Once you get out of my life, I’ll be free at last.

Someday I’ll wake and stop loving you.
Someday I won’t feel like I made a mistake.
Because now I realize,
You were a treasure, a prize…
And I pray I remember you, whenever I wake.

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