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I don't know you like i did

{I just feel so lost
Does he feel the same?
I used to know how he felt}

Long lived eternity
You were every part of me
Our heart beats were rhythmic

As you set my soul free

 

The movie scene i love you

The tears that bid my adieu

The atmosphere lifted

As our world continually drifted

{We must have been to good for reality}

 

To awaken to the world together

As everyone watched us pledge forever

That night was all that mattered once upon a time

Now i see it's time to untie that bind


The movie scene i love you

The tears that bid my adieu

The atmosphere lifted

As our world continually drifted

{We must have been to good for reality}

 

Can't forget the look in your eyes

I can't seem to break the ties

You showed me life and love can be true

Now i feel i don't even know you

 

The movie scene i love you

The tears that bid my adieu

The atmosphere lifted

As our world continually drifted

{We must have been to good for reality}

 

 

 

 

Author notes

i love you, always will. thank you for showing me i can love again after all the pain i went through in my prior relationship. I feel empty without you by my side but i will learn to live and maybe just maybe one day love another

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  • Antebellum
    May 27

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    "The movie scene i love you

    The tears we blended into

    The atmosphere lifted

    As our world continually drifted

    {We must have been to good for reality}"


    totally relatible.
    so many people can understand this.

  • aww...

    i know how you feel, been there done that. but i know that someday, sometime you will find someone who will love you forever. time is unending. u r a beautiful person and someday someone will see that and appreciate it more than anyone else has. in my opinion, u r a very loveable person, uve just been through so much in ur 18 years and going thru all of that will make u a stronger person. maybe sometime i will tell u my story and ull understand...cuz pain makes us all more durable, depending on how we deal with it.

  • The rhyme is simply sublime for in it there is much joy to be found and like some kind of joyous toy I find it very much profound.

    Gosh you have made me make some kind of silly rhyme.



    I like it, I like it so!