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The Title is a LIE!!!!!! A TASTY, TASTY LIE!!!!!

To be honest
I'm not surprised
That things have happened
As they have
I'm not surprised
That I'm sitting here quietly
The knowledge that I've become invisable
Swimming through my mind
Colliding with the other thoughts
Of humble angels
And memories of fire starting kisses
I'm not surprised
To find her in my arms
Wrapped so secruely
It's not surprising to find
That she feels safe
I can only hope that she knows
How much I love her.
I'm not surprised
To know that they still don't think
That I'm worth it
That they're still disappointed in me
To be honest
I'm not surprised
That things have happened
As they have
And I'm where I am right now

Author notes

I did this in class a few days ago....idk

~May 13, 2009; 4:57 P.M~

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  • altatok
    July 18

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    Baby... Are you ok? This is all mixed emotion-y and it's beautiful but I'm sort of confused I think. What's wrong? I do know that you love me, and I love you more than anything darling. I'm sorry I didn't read this until now, but I haven't gotten on here and you didn't say you'd written anything new. You're not invisible. And why just memories? I'm so confused. This is a really wonderful poem, but it makes me worried. Did I do something wrong?
    I love you.