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As dust among the Stars


Carry me
Carry me
on spahire waves
to lands I've never seen
carry me
carry me
down to worlds
beneath the sea...

Shall I lie on the grass
on the isle of Avalon
bathed in light
of the moon
raining on the lawn

Shall I sail in the desert
on my ship made of dreams
searching for the harbor
to wake me
from my dreams

Shall I
sail away
sail away
as dust among the stars

Shall I
sail away
sail away?

Carry me
Carry me
on spahire waves
to lands I've never seen
carry me
carry me
down to worlds
beneath the sea

Shall I dwell on the shores
of kingdoms built of gold
glittering among the sands
Shall I seek unknown caves
far beneath the earth
wishing upon magic lamps

Shall I
sail away
sail away
as dust among the stars

Shall I
sail away...



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Prompt: Immortal

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  • Antebellum
    May 28
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    I really like how you repeat " carry me" && "sail away"
    nice write. :]