Crayon in the street
Dreams shatter, broken on the floor.
No longer in my box.
Crumbled, upon the rocks.
Fragile, my heart keeps beating.
Look deep inside, my colors bleeding.
Never will I return the same.
You thoughts put me to shame.
With you I want to be apart.
I stand with a broken heart.
Never to fall asleep.
Crayon broken on the street.
Author notes
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A contest entry
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1500 points, ended June 8, 14 entries
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I like this a lot. The rhymes flow in a soothing sort of way, and your word choice is beautifully penned. Nice write and good luck in the contest!
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well done - tears fell as I read your words for I have felt the emotions of love within your words. heart breaking when the light that shines within your soul and brings color to your life breaks your heart and shatters the dreams you wished so much for. i have been there and luckily am best friends dispite the lack of shared love emotions. thanks for entering the contest and many blessings of love and peace xxx
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thanx so much
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