i was there
i watched you
you didn't know
but now you do
i knew your depression
i knew it well
it was your confession
it wasn't mine to tell
the lies i told for you
now gone to waste
the times they scolded you
said you were a disgrace
but theres no sense in hating you
now that your gone
i'll just keep pushing through
i'll keep moving on
In Loving Memory Of Laurance
Author notes
for a friend who didn't make it.
Larry, you will always be in my memory.
Ella
A contest entry
- Friends, and Sucide by HatedLoveDieingRose.
415 points, ended May 20, 14 entries
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I'd love to know what you think..am I good for my age?
Comments
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u did a good job. im sorry for your loss. very well written
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yes you are
I think that this is a good start! I'm sure when you practice more, you'll be amazing. Good job. -
This is a really sad poem..im sorry this happened to you! Good job..
Good luck.
Ashley
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