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A Moment From The Heart: random day 1

I feel so cold and uncaring
and you say "love me"

I do
But love means nothing when I say it to you.

For this broken soul
dosent wunt to be whole

So dont you see
foolish little thing?

No matter what you do
Most likely,
                    "I'll never love you."

Author notes

This is just what i'm feeling right know. I'm not a emo and a gothe depresso. I just wanna say what i'm feeling. I dont care wether its right or wrong. It's what it is and thats the way i love it..lol..hahahaha...( inside joke..lol..)

May-14-09

What kind of love do you think this poem speaks of?

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  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    July 29

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    What kind of love do you think this poem speaks of?
    I think it speaks of one that is evidently over. One that's run its course and finally spilled into the sea.
    That's the way to write Naomi! Straight from the heart.
    Bravo!


    • nobumagawaX
      July 29
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      thank you

      your words are encouraging..i do try to say things that i feel..most of them become my fav..becuse i know the deep feeling in them..this poem is one of the..crazy enough it makes me happy when i read it....thanks for the comment..i've been waiting for one on this poem!!!!!