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Insatiable

Lips and tongue burn,
Melded together into this spectacle.
Your skin is rank with poison
You whisper that I am addiction.
My ear tingles with your hot breath,
And I position myself to take another drag.
You've gone out of focus, again,
But I smile at everything you say.
My incomprehension feels you--
Now I see you, now I don't.

Author notes

Supposed to be an acrostic...but I don't really feel like arranging it like that right now. The word "insatiable" IS in there. Just...not in line. lol

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