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lightning strikes
twenty five stories high
he wonders if she too feels the coming storm



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you calm me

 


he whispers
through the half dawn of early



it stormed all night
and you were here
nestled in the pause between light and sound

resting your head on my chest
listening to my heart




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she holds his hand between her own
traces square nail beds

runs a finger along his life lines




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he says contentment
and she nods
recognizing herself in the soft drape of his word

in the language of his desire

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • senator
    May 24

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    Full!!!!!

    Contentment is encompassing just as moon and light. Desire and longing 25 stories high, 25 years later.

  • Still want to be him

    Sigh


  • Jersene gold member
    May 15

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    beautiful, and soft.

    'nestled in the pause between light and sound'
    love that line

  • Rowan gold member
    May 15
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    I like the softness in this, beautiful m.

  • nothing short of yummy
    this shines
    love how simplicity weaves complexity

  • this is what love is... the randomness of hands and stories told with such ease...
    you make it look so easy to write these vignettes but they are perfect
    not a word wasted yet the whole story is there to see

    i love a man with good hands..
    yes
    strong


  • notorious gold member
    May 15
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    You shook me all night long.


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 14

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    this is beautiful...how love poetry should be written. you should do this more often...

    ~ Nicolette


  • Allyce May gold member
    May 14
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    Gorgeous, your softer side

  • this flows like a whispered dream...very romantic


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    May 14
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    very beautiful...



    al


  • Daizee silver member
    May 14

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    This is to die for...truly. Soft, elegant, romantic.. just shoot me now.. lol

    Bravo!

    Stacy

  • Amazing! just amazing!

  • Breathes damn well to me C

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