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Sunset

Fire in the sky,
Creeping down upon the world:
Discovering color.

A contest entry

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  • Samplette gold member
    May 27

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    Beautiful!! You don't need punctuation in an haiku, but i like the write very much. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • Jonbug gold member
    May 15
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    Fire discovering color. I like that concept!


  • Olivias Violin
    May 14
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    I like the last line