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Missing You

If you leave what will I do
Is it wrong to say that I love you
I'd just be missing you

The laughs, my tears, your hugs kept me here
What will I do with out that
Without your arms around me
Without your eyes on me
I'd just be missing you

To put a heart through that much pain
It's just not fare
My last question is would you
Be missing me

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  • GothicFyre
    October 1

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    Beautiful writing, I know exactly how this feels, I'm going through it right now. This poem was beautiful because of its simplicity, really good writing.

  • Self-Inflicting
    May 15
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    dat was so good it really reminded me of my relationship and made me think. I love it!

  • momosnightmare
    May 15
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    i like it. i wonder if my x-boyfriend
    my ever miss me


  • RazorBladesRomance
    May 15

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    Aww me likey. Crap i feel that way when I think of my bff leaving and moving to a new skool for next year *Sigh*.. good poem.


  • luvveremo411
    May 15
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    loved it

    its exactly how i feel when im around my boyfriend.

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