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Where's the end, Where's the beginning
Where's the thread that ties us all together
Does it blend in with the rest of life's tiny fibers
Or does it shine so bright we could never even hope
                      to ever even
      imagine
                  seeing it?

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  • forbidden2love
    May 14

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    very deep, makes you think about the infamous 'Why?' question... overall great

    keep it up!

    ~bestie<3