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Passive

I reside, comfortably uncomfortable,
within the solace
of thoughts

Outside, you
express your inner ponderings,
your admirable insights

So I know you,

partially

though I remain a mystery,
not necessarily of the enticing sort,
perhaps dull,

pathetically inept at leveling my eyes

to yours

Author notes

“I felt you in my life before I ever thought to.”
Nineteen – Tegan & Sara

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    May 29

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    cool writing...you express your thoughts in a very unique fashion. i liked your style. thanks for sharing...peace and light, Kp


  • ann-e
    May 28
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    "comfortably uncomfortable"

    I love that!


  • blood.stained.tears
    May 16

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    hmmm...different, i liked it, and i like the way you set up the lines, they weren't really stanzas just lines, so it make it different, but i like different, its always a refreshment to read something that isn't on everyones plater, you know? like a drink of water when all you've had was kool-aid. the just water is great. thanks for sharing it with me,