i am a lost piece of night
as clanking constellations
unwrap my darkness
orion my embrace
as ivory sneers its silv'ry trace
quiet as your gentle kiss
i am voiceless
as a puppet on a string
dangling in dusted honey
a stone of consequence
tied in twilight's thread
as she sings
through the whole
of my heart
In a list
A contest entry
- The Missing Piece... by lowercase prelude.
400 points, ended May 28, 32 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Absolutely beautiful love poem, done with such elegance and well deserving of the Gold Trophy it is sporting.
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one
A great first piece to give flight to my comments. I enjoyed reading this, the way you broke it down was effective and nicely done. I especially enjoyed the imagery, the idea of weaving a heart, the piece of a night, lovely!
xx
gypsy -
Awww, you've always been a Knight in Sparkly Armor to me, Scribe. This is such a sweet penning, my Friend...not in a saccharine sense, but in a skillful sense, of course. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. 
Wanderer
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omg!
♥
this one has me speechless...
another one of those that only you can write...
Oh thanks, I am weepy now...
Lynda
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so seductively sweet
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love this!
m
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