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Wonderment Beyond Compare (written to go with picture of horses in a field)

Free and wild in meadows green
Creatures of beauty set the scene

Showing gracefulness and charm
God please keep them from all harm

Mare and foal will wander there
Wonderment beyond compare



J Lloyd

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Prompt: Picture 1

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  • judmc
    September 25

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    A little Gem

    A nice little poem showing your love of animals no sign of bitterness or regret
    sweet in it's brevity nicely done....Best Wishes.....George

  • judmc
    June 14
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    Pleasant Write

    A nice little poem Jenny no typos rhymes well, not long enough but it will have to do, enjoyed it. have a look at my "Concision" very educational !!!
    congrats on the Honorable winner trophy
    Best Wishes George...


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    May 19

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    I saw the picture and your words bring it to life..such a tender write..beautifully done. I wish you all the best.


  • ennovy silver member
    May 15

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    What beautiful wish....for their protection....thank you for entering this contest...Novy